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Now in 3,2.1 put your helmet’s on and buckle your selves in we are going to time travel back in the past all the way to the thundery wet and sunny holidays.Well in my holidays I went to laser tag in north shore.I went with my uncle,cousins,my brother and me.when we got there it was cold so we ran inside.When my uncle was paying for our tickets we were doing bottle flips and my brother and cousin were playing at the arcade.So we were waiting for a couple of minutes then suddenly we got called to go into a darkened room to watch a safety video. After that video we ran into a room with the cool laser guns and jackets.The first team we were in was blue. We had jackets that had laser targets on the shoulders,back and stomach so I ran really fast to our base and tried to make sure I didn’t get shot. Suddenly someone from red team shot me.Then I said to myself “it’s on” then I got up and ran after a while I tripped I saw my cousin get shot.Then my uncle and brother said “agumon” so I came and we split up three people protecting our base and three go out and find bases to destroy.If you destroy a base it’s 2,000 points and the little ones are 50 points but me and my uncle just shot bases and people.
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So well that 15 minutes were over and the gun said “GAME OVER”so we stop playing and my uncle said to have a rest or play at the arcade.But I decided to play bottle flips with my cousin. When we were playing bottle flips the laser tag owner came out and said it’s your turn to play when he said that we shouted “yes!!” and we all ran in with excitement locked and loaded said my uncle then everyone said yes!! So we ran in and we all split up.In the second round I just kept on running soon after that I ran into a wall and someone shot me right on the back so I ran away.Then this boy from the red team got shot by someone and said to me that he was in my team but when his gun loaded he shot me and I said you “lire” and he started laughing because I felt for his lie.Then my cousin shot him and I started laughing because he laughed at me and again I ran for my life shooting everyone.After five minutes again the gun said “GAME OVER”.At that time we all quikley put our guns away and we ran out to see our score.My score was 20,345.
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Then we went to go get pizza from pizza hut my cousins said yummy for my tummy so we drove off into the dark cold night.It felt like I was in Antarctica. Then we ended up at the parking lot by the pizza hut and uncle said wait here I’ll go get the pizza.A few minutes later guess what? was even delicious fries and garlic bread “YEA” I said licking my lips.Soon after that we drove off to Glen mall parking lot to eat our Delicious pizza,garlic bread and fries.When we finished eating we all hopped out of the car to play tag. We had a really small boundary because it was a parking for cars and were obviously not a car LOL. So our game started in 3,2,1 blastoff.First in was uncle and he was targeting the oldest then he got tagged.After a few minutes it started spitting which sucked because that meant we wouldn’t be able to play.
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Last moment of the scene.So we drive off into darkness full of joy happy and thanking our uncle for a lovely night.So we kept driving and we started to tell funny and cool jokes.In a few seconds my uncle asked us if we wanted a magnum and we all said yep repeating our selves yep me to me please.Then we pulled up at the gas station to buy our magnum and we were all eating happily but I savaged it like it was nothing because it was yummy.After we finished our magnum he asked if we wanted to Cruz in the city so we all agreed on it.When we were look out the windows we seen delightful beautiful lights like colorful angels flying around and at that time it probably was 10’o clock.But we still drove around in the city.Well fun or not fun well I think awesome because that was the best day of the holidays. Then my uncle says home time and we all said NO!!! Well I guess we had to only for bed.So he said who wants to go home first I said yea because I was tired.When we were driving back to the house of chores.Well in that boring situation we were just talking o and wait don’t run away were playing poke Mon go. !!! My cousins are so addicted to that game like I am with Clash of clans.Wait a minute NOOOOOO!!! Guess what I could see just a lovely street waiting for me and my brother.So we go down the street looking outside in the direction I was looking in I saw my aunty and cousin waiting and waiting for us.Well as we jumped out of the car we said our usual thing bye thank you goodnight.When me and my brother were going inside my cousin said what a you holding we said “PIZZA” OK she said.So we ran up stairs and we all ate the rest of the pizza.after a while aunty told us to go bed so play time was over and bed time wasn’t BORING.So characters Vinnie,Nico,Jack,Braidin,peter and Latin.
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This is about my holiday Hope you in joy.
Hey Jack,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mitchell. I am from Room 7 at Pt England School. Thanks for commenting on my blog. Your holidays sounded amazing. I hope you had fun.
Keep up the good work.
, Mitchell